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Postby Red » 2004.03.24 2:21 am

I had to write this for my English class, but I thought it was decent enough for the forum. Enjoy.

Christmas Morning

He browsed down the next aisle, still hoping to finish up this yearly shopping trip. Toys on clearance, new sales, new dolls, always a new product children would no doubt be wishing to get.

“Why didn’t Clare do this?â€
I'd piss Coors if I could. You believe that happy crappy?


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Postby Jeff » 2004.04.14 9:00 pm

Kage, start making your posts more worth my time to read.
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Postby Kage » 2004.04.14 9:20 pm

Ya, okay sorry. The story kind of reminded me of a Chucky movie. It also reminds me of different show but I can't put my finger on it. Had to do with these little dolls that went around under the floor boards of a Souther Plantation.

ugh. The thoughts of the movies just brings chills up my back again.

Still good story.

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Postby peteyboy » 2004.04.14 9:31 pm

Yeah, Red, I forgot to tell you earlier, I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work. Hove you thought about taking a creative writing course? They have ones that are just for fiction story writing. just a thought. It would help you get your work critiqued better and maybe even some exposure.

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Postby Red » 2004.04.14 9:47 pm

I had to write that story for my creative writing course, Petey. :]

I realize it comes off as a Chucky rip-off, but my teacher gave us an article about Mattel being sued because of having dolls that moved its jaws, and said to write a story related to that somehow.

People wrote stuff about mechanical dolls that got kid's hair caught in his mouth, and well, I liked my approach better. :lol:
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Postby Jeff » 2004.04.19 2:01 am

Speaking of Chucky, one of the previews at Kill Bill 2 (and Punisher) was for a new one: "Seed of Chucky".

Horror movies are unfortunately just like the characters they're about: They just don't die.
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